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dark lil mind
pretty much wats on my mind
We like so much, the pain
We're spoiling at the knife
Pretend that the picture is perfect
I cut myself to sleep
I close my eyes for a second
And meet the friendly soul
I scream to why I'm lonely
The echo calls my life

If I ever
If I never
Make me want to stand up for whatever
Make me say
Make me pay
Make me understand you're there for me

Take this life
I'm right here
Stay a while and breathe me in

Take this life
I'm right here
Stay a while and breathe me in

When it comes down to victory within me
I know that we're in for days
No time to play
Why do you think I called upon you to take me on
Whittle me down to pieces
Put me back, do it right this time
Fight with me until the selfish help
Burn my house until I end up with nothing

If I ever
If I never
Make me want to stand up for whatever
Make me say
Make me pay
Make me understand you're there for me

Take this life
I'm right here
Stay a while and breathe me in

Take this life
I'm right here
Stay a while and breathe me in

These thougths burn a hole in my heart
These thoughts will keep me feeling

These thougths burn a hole in my heart
These thoughts will keep me feeling

If I ever
If I never
Make me want to stand up for whatever
Make me say
Make me pay
Make me understand you're there for me

Take this life
I'm right here
Stay a while and breathe me in

Take this life
I'm right here
Stay a while and breathe me in






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ur my never-ending memory
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commentCommented on: Thu Dec 25, 2008 @ 06:57am
mike.. is that a song or a poem? ...it's really good! feel better =) heart


commentCommented on: Thu Dec 25, 2008 @ 07:00am
song hun



unloved_emoloser381
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Unforgiving_Emo_Princess
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commentCommented on: Thu Dec 25, 2008 @ 06:44pm
ehhh....im feeling kinda depressed so i didnt read it all....soo from wat i read it was good!


commentCommented on: Sat Jan 03, 2009 @ 04:10pm
it's really good //_^ i wish i knew the tune though... >.<



xXcontemplated_suicideXx
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Ahh-RealSwagger
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commentCommented on: Mon Jan 05, 2009 @ 04:56am
This is really good, I like the lyrics and their flow. I can almost hear the singing in my ears, the flow of the instruments song and the rhythym as I read, it's definitely well-written!

Good job. ^=^


commentCommented on: Mon Jan 05, 2009 @ 07:59am
the song'z name and artist is
take this life by in flames
great band <3



unloved_emoloser381
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