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Give Me More
When you look at me
My stomach flutters
When you rest your hand on mine
I begin to sweat slightly
When your lips dance with mine
My whole body vibrates
What is wrong with me?
How can I feel this way about you?
It's not right
Not normal
But it doesn't feel wrong...
It feels good
And I crave for more
More of your smile
Your touch
Your soft lips on mine
I want more
I need more
Please give me more






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Little Pixie Dust Fairy
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commentCommented on: Wed Feb 11, 2009 @ 09:46pm
nice poem, the change of tone after the ellipses is effective


commentCommented on: Wed Feb 11, 2009 @ 09:49pm
aww this one is sweet =)
lol i cant get britney spears outta my head tho



ilovedegrassi
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commentCommented on: Thu Feb 12, 2009 @ 02:57am
Awww. Que cute!


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