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The snow falled from the sky

He walked throught the road, young and shy

A tear falled down his cheek so wise

It didn't hit the ground before it froze to ice

A thick mist laid in the air

He sat down and said ''it's not fair''

He hugged his knees and laid his head on them while he got burried by snow

It just came more and more from above

It hurt from his chest

Where his heart ones had rest

The chest was empty and cold as the night

His heart had been in a big fight

Leaved alone without her by his side

When she said ''I love you'' she just lied

He sat there bloody and cold

The blood from his shirt was old

He got it when he cut out his heart from the chest

Gave it to her and went to rest

Surely he would rest for long

The death is beautiful!... as a song...






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Heart 0f Gold
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commentCommented on: Tue Jul 14, 2009 @ 11:46am
WOW~
thats pure and sorrow mixed together it makes me want to cry alil cry
I like it
BUT!
jimmy why dont you make someting as a poem in a happy verion *pokes cheeks smiles and hugz you tight*


commentCommented on: Mon Dec 14, 2009 @ 06:48am
wow is rit i love it ur so deep jimmy



wolf kagome16
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