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Isaac's poems
these are my poems so fell free to make comments
WHY, WHY, WHY!?!?!?
Why...
Must you come in with a smile,
Showing me your crocodile teeth,
A false smile,
Filled only with lies?

Why...
Must you make me care for you,
As a member of my family,
And then leave,
Without a second thought?

Why...
When you leave,
Must you attack my feelings,
Act as if nothing happened,
And smile like nothing is wrong?

Why...
Must you keep going on,
Like everything's fine,
And talk like you're still here,
Only to crush my heart piece by piece?

Why...
Must I keep crying,
My river of tears,
And constantly sob,
Without rest day and night?

Why...
Why...
Why?






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Bellus Malum
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commentCommented on: Thu Sep 03, 2009 @ 02:20am
I think it's a very good poem, it's filled with a lot of emotion and it portrays the your feelings very well...but that's just the opinion of a reader sweatdrop


commentCommented on: Wed Oct 27, 2010 @ 10:11pm
Its soo pretty!!!



Silent___Angel0823
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mista thug isolation
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commentCommented on: Thu Jul 05, 2012 @ 03:53am
lol chris dramallama


commentCommented on: Wed Dec 26, 2018 @ 06:00pm
Why...
Must you look so cute
with that crooked walk
and that looseie gooseie hair doo
but never stop to ask how is a good boy?



Johnny Fappleseed
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