Okay so, I started the book I am planning on writing, but, I'm not sure if its good, I know ur probibly like, 'Psht! You probibly suck at writing!' and, your probibly right, but here is a tast of what my book is:
((Do not copy or I will hunt you down and kill you!))
'It started on a cold evening in the darkest part of the forest where the grass and trees were burnt unto an equal surface so it was a meadowy 10 acre land area. The small hut built in the very middle of the meadow was enough to fit about three people, but nothing more.
The windows were filled with beautiful carvings and designs on the mold. Stained glass filled the three windows of the house. The bricks were a burgundy red mixed with a murky white. The roof was simply laid out with rough wood tiles cut into a square shape. The door had a beautiful carving of an elfin Lady in the form of an Aquarius, it was a tradition that all families have their astrological sign imprinted on their front door to benefit the family that of their wealth. If the carving was a bit choppy, then they were poor. If the carving had mild decoration, they were semi wealthy, and if the carving was beautifully etched onto the door with jewels, gold and silver rimming the curves and shadows of the figure, they were rich.
This carving however was etched on beautifully with no fancy decorations, just a normal carving on the door.
A man emerged from the door in a green tunic, tightly fitting so sweat could soak into the cloth and not damper his skin. He had semi loose black pants so he could move about easily. He wore no shoes and he had long grey hair tied into a ponytail. On his face green symbols were painted down the left side of his forehead to his chin. They were elfin letters and whenever a man had them painted on his face, in wherever place they might be seen, they were a wizard. Yes the man was indeed a wizard, and by looking at him you could tell he was a normal, but a powerful wizard of the elfin continent, Sizure.
"Shiranai, please hurry. We must begin your training." A small girl ran out of the hut and raced towards the outside field as the man smiled at her. '
Please tell me what you think.
 Gaaras_Lover · Wed Jun 07, 2006 @ 10:15pm · 1 Comments |
