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Story Time!!!
This is my new diary. It contains not so much secret stuff, so it is alright for people to look and enjoy it. I would like to write about upcoming events, and hope that you don't find it boring. lol. Please enjoy
My second chapter
YAY!!! I finished my second chapter!!!!!! Kagome-chan helped me a lot with this one, so i hope you like it. comment!!!



Kitsu study Haruta closely from the corner of her eye. Why was he being so nice to her when they had just met? ”Is he planning something? Will he take me into an ally and beat me to death because he's part of the Yakuza 1? Or maybe...he'll try to rape me!” she thought fearfully. “No, get a grip Kitsu! How could Haruta be part of the Yakuza?”

1 Yakuza: Like the Mafia, a shady gang that is feared by many and is known in many parts of the world…


"Miss Hamika?" Haruta asked, looking at her. "H-Huh? What?" She asked, pulled from her thoughts by his voice. "You look worried, is something the matter?" She smiled nervously, "Oh, It's nothing. I'm just thinking foolishly." Haruta gave her a warm smile "Don't worry Miss Hamika. You won't get wet. My house isn't too far from here." He told her reassuringly.

“ How could anyone be so polite and inviting?! Maybe I'm worrying to much. There's no way anyone THIS nice could be evil.” She thought.

The two walked in silence for the rest of the way. When they reached Haruta's house Kitsu stared in awe. In front of them was a castle, shadowed in darkness. "This is your house?!" She asked in complete shock. "Why, is it too small?" he asked her questioningly. "S-S-Small??? It's the size of a mansion!" she told in in disbelief. His laughed rang in her ears.

When they were inside she looked around in shock. Every object that she could see in the castle was glimmering with shine and sparkle. But, there were stains of red on the furniture. “Uhh, Haruta, why is there… blood on the furniture?! Haruta? Where are you?!” Kitsu wondered, looking around, for Haruta had disappeared.

When the door closed, Kitsu saw a shadow running towards her. “Haruta? Haruta!” she screamed. Indeed, it was Haruta. He grabbed her waist and kissed her neck. "W-Wha??" she heard herself say. She soon found herself pinned to a wall as Haruta traveled down her neck. "Ha-Haruta..." She told him, losing her breath. “Oh! I was too trusting!”

"He he, what's wrong, Miss Hamika?" He asked her in the not-so-nice-and-creepy-scatchy-voice. H e didn't lift his head to look at her, though his skin felt more rough against her skin. "What are you doing Haruta?! Get Off of me!" She yelled pushing him away with a burst of energy. He fell back and Kistu almost screamed at the sight of him.

He no resembled the form of a human, but more demonic. Sharp fangs grew from his evil mouth. His eyes were not the kind and bright blue eyes she had known, but a blood red filled with lust and a murderous intent. Along with these looks, his hair was a messy midnight black, getting spiked and primal. His looks changed him from that of a human, to a Dark Fox.

Kitsu’s eyes widened when she saw furry ears hidden in his spiked hair, and an aura that was dark red with hatred and evil appeared around. “Y-You’re… What are you?! She demanded in horror. He only laughed. “Ha! Haven’t you seen already? I am a youkai, you stupid girl! And now that you’re in my lair, I can devour you flesh and become stronger!” He told her before he lunged at her with his sharp claws. Kitsu screamed loudly, “Haruta!!!”






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Redav
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commentCommented on: Sun Jul 30, 2006 @ 07:53am
twisted Nice. My kind of taste. Bravo!


commentCommented on: Sun Jul 30, 2006 @ 04:58pm
Oh my god, write the next chapter quick!!!!!!!! eek It's so good!!!! xp



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Kagome_Sakura_Chan
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commentCommented on: Sun Jul 30, 2006 @ 11:31pm
Oooh ~clap clap clap~ xd very nice Imaru-chan. See? Like I told you, the funnest part of being a writer is leaving your fans hanging 3nodding . Keep it up and if you get stuck again I'll be happy to help you. After all, fellow writers must help other ones as well ^ . ^


commentCommented on: Sun Jul 30, 2006 @ 11:32pm
Thankyou thankyou!!!



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