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Story Time!!!
This is my new diary. It contains not so much secret stuff, so it is alright for people to look and enjoy it. I would like to write about upcoming events, and hope that you don't find it boring. lol. Please enjoy
My Third Chapter.
YAY THE THIRD CHAPTER IS OUT!!!! And please, anyone, give my some ideas for what the title should be!!!





“Haruta!” Kitsu screamed as Haruta plunged towards her. He scratched her stomach, causing her to bleed fairly fast. “Ahhh!! Kitsu yelled in pain. She fell down, her arms on her stomach. “Finally, in all my years without human flesh!” Haruta told himself. He jumped at her, but dropped to his knees. “Get away!” he yelled. Then, he split into two demons. “Stay away from her… I won’t allow you to kill her!” the first demon said. “What’s wrong? Do you actually care about her? She’s just a human, and I’m a demon. You can’t control me, you never will!” the second demon yelled. “I can try…” the first demon replied. The second demon flew towards the other, and they became whole again. Haruta fell down, with two scars of foxes burning into his hands.



“Uhh… Ah!” Kitsu got up, but fell down in pain. “Please forgive me for giving you that mark under your skin. The wound was deep, I’ll give you that.” Haruta apologized. “Haruta?” Kitsu mumbled. “What happened?” Kitsu asked, wincing. “Kitsu, before, it wasn’t me. I couldn’t stop myself. Even before we came here, when we were walking, I wasn’t myself. I knew you wouldn’t be able to trust me. After all you’ve been through, I could have killed you.” He stared at his scars, then into Kitsu’s eyes. “But, what were you?!” Kitsu asked, pounding her hand on her knee. “ Kitsu, you wouldn’t understand. Just go home, I don’t want you to see me anymore.” He frowned. “H-Haruta?” Kitsu, said, wiping her tears away. Haruta pointed towards the door, his head down. Kitsu, weeping, got up and walked slowly back to her house. “I’m sorry Kitsu.” He said.

“Haruta, why did you have to do that? I do want to see you again!” Kitsu said crying. “I can’t let you go. You’ve done so much for me.” When she got home, she laid on her bed, and took out her picture of Haruta. “What?!” she screamed. The picture had changed from Haruta’s human form, to his demon form he possessed. Then, from Haruta’s chest, a flame sprouted. It grew until the whole figure of him disintegrated. “What? Haruta! I must get back to him!” She grabbed her coat and ran outside, to where it was pouring rain. She ran as fast as she could to the castle. She pushed open the doors and ran inside.






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Redav
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commentCommented on: Mon Jul 31, 2006 @ 07:50pm
gonk Gah! More suspense!
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Can't wait 'till the 4th one comes out! mrgreen


commentCommented on: Mon Jul 31, 2006 @ 09:08pm
Hm..O.o that was an extremely fast chapter... interesting...Try to go a little more into the story. Around the fourth or fifth chapter I should be able to come up a name for the story 3nodding .



Kagome_Sakura_Chan
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commentCommented on: Tue Aug 01, 2006 @ 05:44am
Nice chapter!! xd But ummm...I just want to know how did she come to care about Haruta that much when they had just met..... sweatdrop


commentCommented on: Wed Aug 09, 2006 @ 10:04am
Awwwwwwww.....I'm about dying in suspense for the next chapter, sakura!!!!! gonk Please write it!!!!! domokun



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Kitsu Hamika
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commentCommented on: Fri Aug 11, 2006 @ 05:27pm
I KNOW IM SORRY!!!!! I CAN"T THINK SO EASILY NOW!!!! My chinese friend left yesterday and i am soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sad. crying gonk crying gonk
ill write it as soon as i can


commentCommented on: Sun Aug 13, 2006 @ 03:34pm
Awwwwwwwww!!! gonk *cries with sakura-san* gonk I'm so sorry for your friend, I hate losing friends too.... crying Take as much time as you want with the next chapter! heart *huggles*



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Kitsu Hamika
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commentCommented on: Mon Aug 14, 2006 @ 03:51am
aww thanks anime-chan. and my japanese friend left today. its ok. i have her email address! arigato again


commentCommented on: Sun Aug 27, 2006 @ 04:56pm
Great story but a little short...Im in suspense though. Umm...PM me when you finish the next chapter.



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Lord0fAngels
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commentCommented on: Sun Jan 21, 2007 @ 04:17pm
Wow I just read all three of your chapters.... and amazing story...... I have title for ur story but I don't think you'll like it...... Since Kitsu can tell when Haruta can change into demon or not.... and since she can draw a perfect picture of him in a notebook at will, how about "Demon Notebook?" I dunno, I just came up with it..... I'm writting stories myself, Maybe I should put it here too..... Nice story though keep up the good work!


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