Soo i've been bugged by a friend of mine to post my Ghost story i'm writing for my English final. I dunno if you people will like it or not but well...POOIE ON YOU! xD
Anyways I hope ya'll like it and what not. I also don't no the names. So the letters that are bolded are the names of my characters...for now. x3 There are 6 Chapters x3
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CHAPTER 1
Long long time ago. In a land far far away...Wait! Hmmmm. That’s not the book I want. Let’s see. *runs fingers along a book shelf* Aha! This is the one I’m looking. It’s called 11:11. Now…on with the story.
One dark and dreary day, three young men were out in a car, driving. Supposedly they were on a road trip but hey, you never no. Anyways one of these young men, who had bright blond hair and baby blue eyes, whose name was Q, was driving the car and he suddenly shouted, “Gawd dang it!” as smoke started to twirl up from the hood of the car. He pulled the car over to the side of the road and got out. Q hated it when things went wrong for him, especially anything to do with mechanics. Thankfully one of his friends was a mechanic.
“D! I need your help. The stupid car is being evil!” D, who had brown hair pulled back into a braid and dark brown eyes, got out of the car and walked over to stand next to Q.
“Well, we’re in a big mess now. H! Pop the hood will ya. I need to look at the engine to make sure everything is not blown out as I think it is.”
H leaned from around the front seat and looked underneath the steering wheel, since he was sitting in back seat and pulled the lever to pop the hood. “I popped the hood for ya D!”
D just waved thanks and opened the hood to look at the engine. He started to mumble obscenities and banged his fist on the front of the car.
“Dang! The engine is totally over heated. Q what did you do to it?!”
“D I didn’t do anything! I was just driving all peaceful like, and then I see all this smoke coming out from underneath the hood. I didn’t do anything! The car just hates me.”
“Right Q, right.”
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CHAPTER 2
D started thinking on what the three of them were going to have to do. “Well we can’t just stand hear because,” D looked up at the sky, “it’s going to start to rain. There are dark clouds gathering. I don’t really want to stay inside this puny car while there’s a storm going on. Come on you two, let’s go look for some better shelter.”
So the three friends locked up the car and took only the belongings they truly needed. They started walking along the road. It started to get foggy and rain drops started to fall.
D thought he saw something. “Hey guys. What’s that over there?” D said while pointing towards a shadow that was silhouetted by the fog.
“I think that’s a building of some sort D,” H said.
“Well lets go check it out,” Q said to his two friends. So the three of them started walking towards the building…
“Ummm guys, we’re walking through a cemetery. I hate these things,” D said. “Alright D, lets hurry hmm?” Q Said.
H, Q and D all hurried through the cemetery and stopped in front of the building that was silhouetted by the fog. It was a church.
“Damn,” D said, “This brings back bad memories.”
I forgot that D used to live in a church when he was younger but it was bombed when there was a war going on. H thought to himself. I hope he’ll be ok.
“Hey guys,” Q said to his two silent companions “the church door is open.” Q was looking inside the church to see if there was anyone inside. H and D looked around Q, into the church. “So I heard this story from my sister Iris. She told it to me when I was young because she always liked to scare me. She said that at 11:11 each night, ghosts would come out and walk among the living,” Q whispered. “Hey H, what is it?” D asked. “10:50” “What is it now, H?” “D, its still 10:50.” “Oh.”
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Chapter 3
“Guys, I don’t want to stay here. Let’s go look for a different place to stay,” Q whispered. “I don’t want to stay here any longer then we have to.”
“I agree with Q. I don’t want to stay here when these ghosts supposedly appear,” D said.
“Sure. Lets go.” H said.
The three friends closed the church doors and walked out into the fog. “We better stay together you two,” Q said to D and H who were fooling around.
“Awww you’re no fun Q,” D said.
“Hey! Where did H go? He was just here a minute ago.” D and Q looked around trying to find H. They didn’t see him anywhere.
While D was talking to Q, H was wandering around lost in the fog. Damn fog. It’s messing up my sense of direction. I can’t see anything thin-g! H fell into a hole all of a sudden. Hey! Where the h-e-double hockey sticks did this hole come from?! I don’t remember seeing this when I was walking around here. Damn. Now I’m going to have to call out for Q and D to help me outta this mess I got myself into. H looked down at himself feeling all slimy and wet. Gawd! I’m all muddy now too! Stupid fog! I curse at you! H started cursing and then sighed. He took a deep breath and called out, “D! Q! I need your guys help!”
“Hey H, how did you get down there?” D asked, while looking down into the hole which H was currently standing in.
“Well D, I was just strolling along and I saw this hole and I was like ‘why don’t I just jump in this hole and roll around in the mud,’” H said to D sarcastically.
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Chapter 4
“H stop harassing D and grab my hand so I can pull you out of this dirt hole,” Q said.
H mumbled and grabbed Q’s hand. “Thanks Q.”
“Hey H, I thought you were stuck in a hole?” Q asked.
“I was Q.”
“I don’t see one around.”
“Strange.”
D was looking around and he couldn’t see anything worth monkey poo. “Hey guys, I think we really should head back to that church. It’s too foggy to find our way around here. H, I also think you should get out of those wet clothes.”
“D, I left the stuff back at the church.”
“Well,” Q said, “I guess we’re going back to the church then.”
“Hey H,” D asked, “What time is it?”
“11:09”
The three boys looked at each other and decided to hurry to the church to let H change his clothes. After walking for what felt like thirty minutes, they finally reached the church in less than a minute. They opened the church door and stepped inside. H walked over to where he left his clothes and changed out of his wet ones into dry clothes.
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Chatper 5
“Hey Q,” D asked, “Do you remember seeing a pew here when we looked in last?”
“No. I didn’t remember seeing one or that organ over there either,” Q said while pointing towards the front of the church.
“Hey, H. Where ya going?” D asked.
“I’m going to play the organ,” H said in a monotone voice. Q and D looked at each other confused and followed H. Q looked around and noticed that there weren’t any cracked boards or windows. He looked back at H to see him playing a shiny organ. One that looked as if it was brand new. But that can’t be possible. Q said to himself. This place has been abandoned for a long time. While Q was thinking, D was looking around noticing that there were people sitting in the pews and he could hear singing. Then he heard a voice singing close to him. He looked over at Q and saw that he had this strange look in his eye and he was singing. He was singing the song that the people in the pews were singing. What the heck is going on? D asked himself. This church was abandoned when we got here. D continued looking around and he noticed that there were lights shinning, while people were sitting in the pews, singing.
H was playing the organ like he knew how to play like a professional but D knew that H couldn’t play anything worth dittly squat. Q was singing with a voice of an angel but D knew Q had a voice that sounded like a frog trying to sing.
It can’t be my two friends here. I would remember if they ever took classes to help improve their so called ‘talents’.
D suddenly felt himself moving towards one of the pews. Hey! What is this? D knew he was looking out through his own eyes but couldn’t control his movements. What’s happening? He watched as his hand reached out and grabbed a strand of rosary beads. Rosary Beads? He kneeled down and started to pray. Or at least that’s what he thought he was doing. He felt his head lowering, D tried to fight it but couldn’t. Why do I feel like I should be confessing all my sins? He felt as if he sat there for an hour but it was only a few minutes. He felt himself start to stand up and he was able to look around. Why do I feel like I should be confessing all my sins?[i]Hey, I thought H was sitting there, playing the organ. Where did he go? For that matter, where did Q go?[i/] D thought suddenly. He looked around frantically trying to catch sight of his two friends. D couldn’t see his two friends anywhere. What the heck. Where did they go? Everything is still the same, except my two friends are now gone.
D abruptly felt himself drifting away into darkness. Then everything went dark.
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Chapter 6
“D! Hey D! Wake up! D!” D could hear someone calling his name frantically and shaking his shoulder. He tried pushing his way through the darkness to reach whoever was calling his name.
“Come on D. Wake up! You’re scaring Q here.”
That made D fight harder and he slowly opened his eyes and looked around. All three of them were sitting in the car.
“Guys, what happened?” D asked.
“We were sleeping in the car because it broke down and then when Q felt you thrashing around, we tried waking you up but you wouldn’t. You were just laying there twitching this way and that,” H said.
“D, I was so scared that you were having a fit of some kind or something,” Q said.
“Don’t worry Q, I’m awake now,” D said softly. D felt something in his hand and he looked down. In his hand he was holding a strand of rosary beads. Rosary beads? I thought it was all just a dream.
“Hey H, what time is it?” D asked, while still looking down at the strand of rosary beads.
“11:12”
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