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I post when I need to remember something or just feel like it.
A new heart and a quick made-up story.
Thursday during lunch my time I'll be going to the hospital to get a new heart. What's wrong with my old one? It's not strong enough to help me live pass 22 now, that's why I'm going to the hospital in the first place.



~My wierd mini story I made up in 5 minutes~
You are in search for your one love. Only to find that many wanted to have your love too. She was a frail young girl, but very beautiful. Out of all of them she chose you and you alone. You spend many days together. You both laugh and cry together. Until the day she was gone. You wish you could have spend more time with her. You wish you can hold her in your arms again. Every night you think she tries to contact you in your sleep. One day you decided to never wake up.

When you woke up you see a field of flowers next to dry desert like land. You also see people in white and some people in black clothing. Each person had wings. The ones in white had normal angel wings. The ones in black have black wings. The good angels are in a line passing through a light. The bad angels are being force to go in a fire pit. You look at yourself and notice that you're in black. You panic for a while. A man in a black cloak carrying a scythe was standing infront of you. You stop panicing and you lower your head. The cloak man told you to follow him. He says that you made a mistake to decide to never wake up again. You thought you were going to the bad line, but he lead you to an angel.

You were shock to see who it was. It was your love. Your one and only. As you approach her you put your head on her lap and cried. She hug you softly and said she miss you too. Then she slap you and said why did you do this to yourself? You said because I can't live without my beautiful angel. You both were silent. Then after a moment happy again. Hugging and kissing your beautiful angel.

When the man in the black cloak came back you thought your happy moment will be over. You and your love follow him. The cloak figure use his scythe and rip a hole in the air. He told you to get in. You had no choice but to do as you were told. You went in the hole only to find that everything you remember disapear. You were reborn but your heart and soul keeps telling you this. Your love is out there. Go find her again.






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The earl of Gray
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commentCommented on: Thu Apr 19, 2007 @ 07:34am
*claps* wow.....that was excillent, i don't think I or anyone else I know could ever do better. That was awsome, bravo! Kudos to your awsome writing skills mrgreen


commentCommented on: Thu Apr 19, 2007 @ 07:51am
"I made it for the avi arena but it said it's over 1000 characters long and can't be put in so I made a shorter version that's not as good for the avi arena."



There is No Heart
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Icarus Fallen
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commentCommented on: Fri Apr 20, 2007 @ 02:35am
Perfect.


commentCommented on: Sun Apr 22, 2007 @ 10:10pm
Wow i love it ^^



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There is No Heart
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commentCommented on: Mon Apr 23, 2007 @ 07:21am
"Thanks!" heart "Maybe I should post my story I made a few years ago... But then it would take a lot of scrolling down if I did. (It's 23 chapters for my first story and 18 for the sequal. Yes I get bored enough to write that much.)" xp "Thanks for the comments!"


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