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Day 8: Just a Dream
In the midst of my day, the light of my life,
Is fading away, I'm holding the knife,
To sever the ties, beyond what is right,
Beyond all the lies, and into the night,
To shatter the seal, and answer her call,
But love isn't real, when you fight just to fall,
You reach in the end, but no one is there,
Where once was a friend, is nothing but air,
In more ways you see, the harder it gets,
It's harder to be, without more regrets,
Now you can't accept, when no one believes,
the life that was left, the truth that deceives,
But all is not lost, just hold onto hope,
You know now the cost, to walk up the slope,
So learn from the past, for what it would seem,
It all ends so fast, but it's just a dream.






User Comments: [7]
Caden-pocaigue
Community Member





Tue Jul 03, 2007 @ 02:53am


This is an old one, the original wasn't as long. I had to improvise some of it, just to give it more feeling. Hope you like it!! smile


Hatsuharubabe
Community Member





Tue Jul 03, 2007 @ 03:21am


wow, that's so good.....


94x0x-Cutie-x0x94
Community Member





Tue Jul 03, 2007 @ 12:14pm


OMG caden this poem is awsome


Akira Crosszeria
Community Member





Tue Jul 03, 2007 @ 07:28pm


Wow.......................thats............thats...............deep


xEmpty Heartsx
Community Member





Thu Jul 05, 2007 @ 08:59am


Awesome....I love this poem! biggrin xd

.....So deep emo


Grey Oblivion
Community Member





Sat Jul 07, 2007 @ 08:49am


I remember this one..... it's different though, but better. You wrote this just after you and Tasi broke up, man those were sad days. You wouldn't come out of your room for anything but more writing material. No food, no sleep for weeks, nothing to keep you up but a pen and paper. Those were horrible days. crying


They Call Me Eyes
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Wed Jul 11, 2007 @ 10:49am


Thats deep

I never knew you could write this good


User Comments: [7]
 
 
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