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My views on life.
If only you knew
As you walk through
a dark hall,
The echo you make,
Isn't the only one.
A reflection almost,
Of a similar boy.
Walking through
The dark hall.
He notices you,
And casts things aside.
He musters an ounce of light
in his body.
He tries to shed
some light on you.
Causing himself,
To fade away.
You stride away from it,
Leaving the sacrifice forgotten
With your closed eyes.
So blind to the world,
If only you knew.
There is an echo
To your step.
Always there
To shed light
While you walk through
The dark hall.
Maybe only a shadow,
But maybe not,
That feeling of safety,
Whenever you collapse,
Isn't from you.

The boy in the shadows,
That always catches you,
Is always by your side,
If only you knew.






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WitnessOfTheRejected
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commentCommented on: Sat Jul 07, 2007 @ 07:13pm
Wow...this one is one of my favorites...really good


commentCommented on: Mon Jul 09, 2007 @ 09:56pm
this is deep.....its probably me ^^



Dark_Monarch
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Ithidan
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commentCommented on: Mon Jul 09, 2007 @ 11:14pm
......Yes mikey it is about you. i already told you that you are the one in the dark hall and i am the echo in your step


commentCommented on: Fri Jul 27, 2007 @ 05:02pm
woah that a sweet poem tight i love it!



NICOLEluvsROXAS
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