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The City in the Sea
The City in the Sea

Under all that lies on top of the accursed land
Is the sea of life and death
Down below with the wonders of man kind
Where it seems peaceful
There is no death
But the remnants of those that are evil
And those that are good
The sea that carries all things that of life and dead
With the bodies of people which
The underland has taken for the need of none
It can seem that this city has more evil and greed than that
On the land we live on in which it is full of crime and sadness
The dark underland has taken the lives of many
And has the stench of blood
It seems to be a place for evil
For the pure evil it contains hidden from the light of God
Mysterious by those who seek for the city in the sea
The gates of hell
Down in the shadow of death
And protected by death itself
Transporting the spirits it has taken from the people of the land
The screams of the people in forever lasting pain
With no hope for a new beginning but watches as thou travels to its
End of life
As the spirits of the dead roam
In the darkness of the sea
Never to return from where it came from
But to be hunted down like a cannibal
Even God can not see the image of the suffering
The cursed immortal beings that rot in the fire of evil
The City in the Sky or as
The angels call it Heaven
As they move abroad
And sing with joy for the others around them
Feasting on the pleasure they were given
As the City of the Sea
With the souls cast away in exile
The evil and the innocent
Screaming in horror at the never ending path of darkness
The place of evil and pain
Hell is where they are sent to
For the rest of eternity
Walking under those on the land
Waiting and watching
When will this end
All the troubles that pain me so
The thought of death was so pleasant at the hour
Where did the time go when we had the time to choose
Or was it a blur that had been started by anothers mistake
For the evil in there hearts
Was it the exile of the people on the land
Where the mind of a person
Is controlled by the devil
To laugh at the death of one another
Is this the world that we have created
Because of our own inner evil
For the hatred of one another
The chaos that surges through the darkness
We have created the City of the Sea
The evil in Hell
Because of the mistakes we can't fix
We all come to accept this on the trial
To the path we are allowed to roam and plunder
The road to the stairs of Heaven
Or the rails of Hell
The City of the Sea
Were all evil is brought together
And will cause the suffering forever until the end of time
Welcome to the underworld
The time you have shared is now over
And your soul belongs to your own evil in the heart of mankind
Where it is casted down into the vortex of souls
And is controlled by the devil with greed and power






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Noremac Deer
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commentCommented on: Wed Jul 09, 2008 @ 06:19pm


I didn't know that you could write... That was an awesome poem/journal entry..
Keep on writing... oh & hello.


commentCommented on: Wed Jul 09, 2008 @ 06:20pm
this is so meaningful. it's so powerful. i love it.



muffins is hacked
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P O T A S S I Y U M
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commentCommented on: Thu Jul 10, 2008 @ 01:03am
omg that was like an awesome poem... It made me want to break down and cry. Your words hit my heart like 1000 arrows.... You are an amazing poet.
Bye Bye biggrin
Amaya


commentCommented on: Thu Jul 10, 2008 @ 03:55am
OH MY GODDDD!!!
i luv this!!!
so deep.
it interst me so much.
*clap clap clap*
i applaud to this.



XxDarkxKillerxX
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darkgempirate
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commentCommented on: Sun Jul 13, 2008 @ 03:55am
Wow your intense and deep personal thought overtake me.You are an amazing writer..Your so eccentric with your words.You just get drawn in..I'm looking forward to your brilliant work in the future.


commentCommented on: Mon Jul 14, 2008 @ 11:56pm
that is some pure awesomenss right there

i luff it



XDeaths_EyesX
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stephcakex3
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commentCommented on: Wed Jul 16, 2008 @ 05:39am
This is awesome!

=D

It's like dark.... But not EVIL dark.

=D


commentCommented on: Wed Aug 06, 2008 @ 07:34pm
wewt, this is good, not as great as "the city in the sky', but still good



kat394
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How About GTFO
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commentCommented on: Sat Aug 09, 2008 @ 09:47am
okies i like them all so far minus..
that they are all unhappy i love the love on though
such a girl right here
xD
i think you need to see the brighter side of life.
have someone bright come in your life and rape it to make another writing point


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