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Blood Blood Blood...Dripping,slipping flesh ripping... A knife stabbs...a wrist was grabbed... Blood...poured from his eyes...as this one cries, and tears stain her face, while sitting, waiting at his resting place... Blood...Coveres her hand...as it rolled onto the land, as it surrounds their bodies in a pool of sorrow... Blood...painful and sad,for almost mad with fear and crazy but somewhat queer... Blood...

Posted by: MewMew01 Tue Aug 30, 2005 @ 09:37pm

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mimsy
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Commented on: Wed Aug 31, 2005 @ 06:49pm


	I only have a tiny bit of constructive criticism, so don't be offended by this, but i read a bunch of your poems and though they are very good, you do know you don't need to make every line rhyme

Commented on: Wed Aug 31, 2005 @ 07:57pm


	yes I know but it is fun....and it's sometime accidental

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Spawn of the Forgotten
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Commented on: Thu Sep 01, 2005 @ 02:39pm


	yea its really cool but shortof creppt.but mostly cool.

Commented on: Fri Sep 02, 2005 @ 03:26am


	Not bad.

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Bloody Rose X
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Commented on: Tue Sep 06, 2005 @ 07:56pm


	I like it 3nodding

Commented on: Mon Sep 19, 2005 @ 09:56pm


	its dark but good

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