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This is my journal, it may be seen by anyone who desires to look at it, but you may be completly confusd about it...Oh, well!!!!!



I Thank You I Thank You Golden light Shining bright Reflecting against her hair Purley enlightening and unfair Her job has been done I have neither lost nor won Her blade pierced my flesh My life has nothing left The only think I have left is death I thank you for my death

Posted by: MewMew01 Mon Sep 18, 2006 @ 08:36pm

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Bia-Hakkai
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Commented on: Sun Dec 24, 2006 @ 02:15pm


	hehe i'm sorry but the poem doesnt flow sweatdrop it feels kinda forced. yah know just let it flow when the words come to you, and you dont HAVE to rhyme. I get the feeling that there was a good meaning behind the poem but the way it was presented kinda killed it. Well i can wait to read your next one 3nodding

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