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Legolas: "GRAWR!!" *growels tiger-like, glares at captors"
Aragorn: *ducks and covers*
Melech: OOF! *sails out door of cell, smacks head on opposite wall*
Doriflen (dryly, from safely outside of cell and away from freaking-out nephew): "I'm guessing that exactly wasn't a scream of agony."
Uruth: "Out of the way." *stomps in*
Aragorn: "Uh, oh."
*brief scuffles and meaty thuds from inside cell*
*sound like cleaver cutting through meat*
Legolas: "Morgoth take it. Aragorn, my claws are stuck in this idiot' face. Help me pull them out before he bleeds all over me."
Uruth (still with Legolas' claws through face): "Mmphgr."
Legolas: "Just brace your foot on his nose and yank."
Aragorn: *grunts with effort*
*sucking sound as shapeshifting Elf's claws are ripped loose from arch-enemy corsairs's face.*
*still-alive undead corsair totters out and is led away, banging against the walls because his one-time-victim clawed his eyes out
Aragorn (softly, without moving lips): "Legolas, look out. Your uncle's coming and he's got those little poison sticks."
Legolas (equally softly): "Wonderful. How long do you think it'll take them to fix Uruth up?"
Aragorn: "You tore him up pretty good. Probably a day or two, unless *He* gets involved. Look out."
Doriflen: *steps in, surrounded by guards* "Leave the human here, but bring my *dear* nephew. I believe there is an old friend waiting to...greet him." *cackles evilly, literally MUAHAHAHA*

ANYWAY, now that I've got that out of my system, on with the show!

Yeah... that was a sample of my writing, only I acually write, as in with descriptions and paragraphs, and so on.
That was also an example of MC, or the Mellon Chronicles, written by the Great Torture Fic Writer and Her Mute Mush Shadow (aka Cassia and Siobhan). Ooh, must go to MC website, read "Exile." Catch y'all later.