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dark lil mind
pretty much wats on my mind
IMPRISONED
imprisoned

Slender beams of moonlight enter
this darkened chamber as I kneel,
always silent, always in pain,
frozen here,
waiting.

Tortured forms wrought in panes of glass loom as
dust dances in the air,
forming an image in my mind,
searing my exposed flesh.

Blood on a mirror's face.

I raise my head, now crying out for
this callous reality.






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Ahh-RealSwagger
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commentCommented on: Sun Oct 19, 2008 @ 02:14am
*Claps* This one I like even better. I really like the way you write - you give your reader a true sense of the imagery with just these words.
Making pain into something beautiful is truly remarkable. Good show, Unloved_EmoLoser381. heart


commentCommented on: Mon Oct 20, 2008 @ 01:42am
This is so Beautiful and Scary and Awesome it's so deep and it has a insanity sense to it also.


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