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Alcohal Kills
(lame title i know! i didn't know what to call it)

Driving down the highway
City lights all around us
You sit in the passenger seat next to me
The music blaring
Us singing at the top of our lungs
I drive
Lying to myself
I'm okay
I'm okay
I only had one
Maybe two
Three tops
It's not that big of a deal
Worriedly I turn the steering wheel
Heart thumping
Visioin blurring
The red sign getting closer
And closer
STOP!
It screams
And so do you
Starting to shake
I move my foot to the break
But I wasn't
Fast enough
Cars fly by
As I watch my best friend die






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HellDevil666
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commentCommented on: Mon Oct 20, 2008 @ 10:20pm
good


commentCommented on: Mon Oct 20, 2008 @ 10:53pm
aww that ending was so sad!
but its true, this is what drunk driving will do to u.
but of course this was so awesome! get ur stuff published already!! wink



ilovedegrassi
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Solo_Soul_000
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commentCommented on: Tue Oct 21, 2008 @ 03:35am
omg! eek your so good at writing. I've been in like... a major writer's block. I started writing a stroy last year and quit that and now I'm slow at writing poetry. I blame homework for this -__- *writes more poems*


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