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Chapter 4: Rise of a New Skye Part 3

~Setting: Dom and Shippo ran into the city in search of Yakari when they are both attacked by a mysterious religious man. Now Dom must fight to not only save his life but perhaps the life of his new found love and the cities~

???: *continues to chant*

Dom: *Throws him off my shoulders and aims pistols at his head* Stop with the ******** weird language s**t!

???: Oh I will...*raises hand in the air* INDIGNATION JUDGEMENT!!! *A giant blade comes crashing down on Dom* DIE INFIDEL!!!

Dom: *gets stabbed in the cheast* Gahhh!!

~The blade then explodes with eletricity all around, the area shines with a bright light~

???: HAhahahaha, so long Sinner! You're Judgement has be--

~Two gun shots ring from the smoke and pierce him in the shoulder and the lower hip~

???: O_O! *falls to the ground* Ahhh...Dammit! But...how?!

~Dom comes out the smoke with his shirt badly ripped and a giant hole through his cheast~

Dom: Because b***h *steps on his cheast* I'm ******** indestructible! Now, tell me *puts my pistol at his head* Where the hell is Yakari!

???: Ya-who? *coughs abit to the pressure caused by Dom's boot*

Dom: ...*takes boot off and walks away* Dont you dare come after me or I'll finish the job.

???: *sits up* Wait! I can help you...!

Dom: *keeps walking* Not in that state.

???: *Green light recovers him* And you're in no condition to keep going >.>

Dom: I can take a beating

~The man catchs up to Dom~

Skye: My name's Skye

Dom: Dominick...Now, *stops*

Skye: *stops next to him* What?

~In the horizon, there stands a giant demonic tower in the distance, demons that can fly float in and out of the tower. A giant demonic pressure can be felt in the air as Dom stares at it~

Dom: *stares some* Looks like I have to check there first...

Skye: For what?! Death?!

Dom: No, for love

Skye: ???

~Dom beings to walk towards the direction of the tower, whcih is a long way away, Skye catchs up and both begin to march into the demon infected city.~

TO
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CONTINUED!






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III Winter Princess III
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commentCommented on: Sun Apr 19, 2009 @ 05:15am
Awesome chapter but Skye isn't a man D< Atleast not if we just met I suppose o_o;;
BUT BAH IT'S YOUR STORY..So keep up the good work xDD


commentCommented on: Sun Apr 19, 2009 @ 05:48am
O_O..... shouldn't I have appeared by nao?... still good



shippo-dono
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XxSeductive DeathxX
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commentCommented on: Mon Apr 20, 2009 @ 04:16am
heart heart KYAAA!!! AMAZING!!! whee whee cant wait for the next chapter!!


commentCommented on: Fri Jun 19, 2009 @ 07:13am
Indeed I am not a MAN!!!! xDDD but yeah can't wait for next part still~



SkyPersona
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