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The first Chapter of a story about the Shounen ai clubhouse
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The Shounen ai Clubhouse

CHAPTER 1: A quiet night

There was no sound in the house except for two small feet climbing out of a childrens crib. A young boy at the age of four had just climed out of his crib and walked out of his room.He had blondish brownish hair and brown eyes, though it was hard to tell as it was dark. He was afraid though he was silent. The only light was coming from a glow in the dark picture on the door he just came out of, the picture shined "Nathan and Jared's room" brightly.

The boy looked around and saw a faint figure in the living room. On the couch laying down with a snug blanket over him was a boy with unmistakably green hair, he was asleep and someone had obviously wrapped the blanket around him tightly and with care. The boy with green hair was around his mid-teens.

The younger boy smiled and looked in the opposite direction of the living room. He continued walking and fell over half way across the hall. He got up and brushed his footed blue pajama's down. He walked up to a door which had a sign on saying "Ryoukai's room" and some pictures of flowers besides it that had been drawn by a child with crayon.

The boy pushed open the door slightly to reveal a rather large room, with flowers on the window side. Many bookshelfs with many books of all kinds mostly fiction, and on a few shelves, pictures of people. The little boy was in alot of them too. In many of them was a young man who at the time was sleeping in a bed near by in the very room. He was a handsome man with a boyish face and with dark purplish blueish hair. He also had blue eyes though at the time were closed. A clock on the side said three in the morning. On top of the mans head were fox ears. As he was a fox sapien. The bed sheets were slightly ascue as the man had turned slightly in his sleep he opened his eyes.

"Daddy?" whispered the little boy. The man sat up straight and turned on a nearby lamp. "Nathan!" he said blinking, "Whats wrong"
"I had a nitemare." Nathan replied looking scared.

"awwww" The man looked symphathetic, He picked the boy up and nestled him in the sheets with him, wrapping his arms around the boy firmly. "Hush little baby don't you cry." He began to sing. "Daddy's gonna sing you a lullabye..." He broke off and looked towards the door. Another little boy, slightly shorter then Nathan, with blue eyes and brown flat hair was standing at the door. "Unkle Ryou?" The man named Ryou short for Ryoukai blinked again. "Whats wrong Jared? You had a nightmare too?"

"Nope" said Jared sleeperly. "I juss got lonly." Ryou chuckled and nodded letting him jump in too. A snuggled both of them in his arms. "I was dunna go into my daddy's wooym but I saw Nayfin go in heer." said Jared

"Its ok Jared. Goodnight you two. Love you both." As they all started to fall asleep the door opened a third time. This time help open by a man wearing black silk pants. "Am I missing the pajama party?" He grinned his red eyes flashing and his white hair shining in the lamp light. "Fel!" gasped Ryou looking surprised. "Daddy" said Jared clapping happally. Fel jumped into the bed at the other end and shuffled his way under the bed sheets to their end. He popped his head out and grinned. "Yo" he said, wrapping his arms around his son Jared while Ryou held Nathan. Both Nathan and Jared giggled, Ryou looked confused but then smiled. Fel grinned more and said "Right everyone sleep now." He turned and clicked the lamp to turn it off. Both of the little boys snuggled with their daddy's. They all said goodnight and the adults told their children they loved them which they got the same reply. "Unkle Fel did yew follow Jawed in heer and yew wanted to tum in too?" whispered Nathan to Fel "Yes I did Nathan" whispered Fel back smiling through the darkness. "Course I put Shmoogy to bed, He had fallen asleep on the couch. I new I forgot to put someone to bed," he laughed. "Ok now time to go to sleep." Both Nathan and Jared giggled and soon fell asleep. Next to fall asleep was Fel, finally, looking slightly bashfull, Ryou's eyes and ears drooped and he fell asleep.






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Jared Valentine
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commentCommented on: Thu Apr 06, 2006 @ 01:26am

wow we dotta "fanfic" going, kool **giggles an claps** tan't wait to reed more ^_^


commentCommented on: Thu Apr 06, 2006 @ 02:16am
that was GREAT! biggrin

.....you may be on with something, natahn. i hope this becomes a hobby of yours. ^_^

.....of course, i would fall asleep on the couch. stare i can fall asleep anywhere. sweatdrop


....still, it was great. 3nodding you nailed everybody perfectly on their personalities and reactions to everything......but im not sure about the fel tucking me in...unless he was in a good mood, and so far from the fan fic, it seems so. :3

like the way you started it. reminded me of the grinch. XD



Shmoogy
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Ryoukai Seijin
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commentCommented on: Thu Apr 06, 2006 @ 03:09am
Thats very good Nathan you are quiet the writer *smiles and ruffles his hair*


commentCommented on: Thu Apr 06, 2006 @ 10:39am
-giggles and hugs and kisses each of yew-

Its not dat good hehe

I'll be writing them once a week or so 3nodding ^ ^

And I did mayke Fel extwa nice

I'll be adding to Shmoo's and Fels personality in future chapturs

plus I dotta intwoduce tha others. Jak and Gash and Ryu and Tuggur and Sesh and sum other peepul dat mite tum in for awhile. And possably get kicked out or sumfing xd



Nayfin
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Feloneus_Hellion_Crimson
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commentCommented on: Thu Apr 06, 2006 @ 04:43pm
You made me extra nice?! But...but, I'm ALWAYS extra nice!! gonk

Just, y'know...not to everyone. twisted


commentCommented on: Thu Apr 06, 2006 @ 04:58pm
-giggles- Yes yew awe always extwa nice ^ ^ to us hehe

heart heart heart heart heart



Nayfin
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Deredon911
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commentCommented on: Fri Apr 07, 2006 @ 10:24pm
woh thts 1 awesome theres 1 thing wrong with it...were am i XDXDXD anyway lol thts very good & i cant wait to read the next part/one


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