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Time for a story
Twas a night like no other the snow had fallen softly on the ground and every where you went you could see happy people buying gifts and holding each others hands. A young man walks along the avenue heading for the place he always goes on the weekends, his girlfriends house. He holds some flowers in his hand and he hums to himself. He keeps walking and walking and he seems confused. "It never takes this long to walk to her house" he thinks to him self. He could see her place down the street but it seemed to get farther away with every step he took. He starts to run to the house wanting to get there sooner. He runs and runs and runs and final arives. He can see that the light is on and he can hear her voice coming from inside, she was singing to her self like she always does at this time of night. The young man tries to open the door knowing that she is awaiting his arrival and she leaves it unlocked. He pulls himself smack into the door when the knob doesn't turn. He takes a step back from the door a look of puzzelment on his face. "She never leaves the door locked whats going on." He suddenly notices a black rose with a note attaced to it on the door step. The young man feels a drop in his heart as he reaches down to pick it up. He spreads the pages slowly till it reads "The door is closed never come back." He drops the rose in disbelife and stumbels backwards. He drops to his knees and mutters, "God! Why?!" The world spins around him and time seemes to stand still as snow slowly starts to fall down like tears from heaven. "How fiting," he thought to himself as the snow he now knelt upon is as cold as the letter. Tears well-up in his eyes as he stands up. He tries to take one last look, yet the tears burr his vision. He turns from the place he once knew as a warm inviteing and comforting. That was all gone now. Heart ache and sadness took its place. He walks off into the night unsure which would last longer, this winter or the winter in his heart.


thanks to my bro for helping edit this story^^






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ZellaBella
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commentCommented on: Mon Dec 06, 2004 @ 05:31am
that story is sweet, depressing but sweet. *huggles*

domokun ZellaBella


commentCommented on: Mon Dec 06, 2004 @ 10:00pm
crying
That's so sad.
Lord knows I've my massive dosage of break-ups and heartaches. I know how you feel. sad



Acryn
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