I walk down an empty street-
It is my life.
I hear a faint heartbeat-
It is my life.
I fear eternity, when will it end?
It is quiet-
I can't hear a thing.
I hear my lonliness,
I hear my pain.
If this goes on, I'll go insane!
The constant shadow of my youth-
The hurt and pain of a jagged tooth.
I see people, but can't get to them.
Their eyes shining like stolen gems.
I wish I were still alive.
I walk down an empty street-
It is my life.
I hear a faint heartbeat-
It is my life.
I fear eternity, when will it end?
I wish I were alive again.
This was my first real poem I ever wrote...aside from those dorky class project poems about flowers or something. I don't know why exactly I kept this one and not many others I wrote after, but I did and I'm very glad I did. I think it's a wonderful first attempt. Many of my more recent poems aren't as good as this...but nobody can do well every time.
There have been many interpretations of this poem by people who have read it...I'd be interested to hear what you got out of it.
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.:Shadows Casting:. -Upon an eternal heart-break-
This was originally going to be some place that I could share my poetry, but I have decided, through hard concideration, that I'm going to use it for more. Dedications, rants, poetry and just sharing things. So...read it. I think you may enjoy.
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