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Me ranting, rambling, complaining, etc.
Fallen Heart
My fallen heart bleeds onenly on the ground.
The rips and tears baring all over for anyone to see.
It weeps with the continued flow of blood.
You broke it when I wasn't looking.
Foolishly blinded and unaware of what you were going to do to my dear poor little heart.
It withers now before you're curl and loveless eyes.
It begins to fall apart as you leave, uncaring what was to become of it.
It lies there in pieces surrounded by a poll of blood, loveless and dead.






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Lil Jissy
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commentCommented on: Sat Oct 14, 2006 @ 02:50pm
User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show. i've read all of your poems, and i must say, they're very dark and bleak. i like your way with words, and they're very deep and emotional. =3 overall, i really like your poems, but maybe you should try different things, experiment. try writing of different topics, of different emotions, of different experiences, and then you will interest the reader much more. =3 User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.


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