- Title: PAGE04 DARK SHINING BLADE EP01
- Artist: regna91
- Description: NEXT IS DSB0105
- Date: 07/16/2009
- Tags: dsb0104
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Comments (7 Comments)
- mitsuki95351 - 07/24/2009
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"i need your help to find it, because a witch called Van told me that only a human from the other world can fined it easily by feel it. . . so i came here for you. ."
corrections:
A witch called Van told me that only a human from the other world can fined it easily by feeling its presents . . . so i came here for you. .
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"why you? because only you believe ma from the other world."
corrections:
why you? because, only you believed me when i told you I'm from the other world - Report As Spam
- mitsuki95351 - 07/24/2009
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"7 years ago, a knight slay that dragon,& the blade was released & its just gone. now everyone is searching for that blade"
corrections:
that dragon was slayed seven years ago & the blade was released.
but its current location is unknown
everyone is searching for it. - Report As Spam
- mitsuki95351 - 07/24/2009
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"at my world there was shining dark evil dragon. if the dragon died, he will release a dark shining blade. that blade is so powerfull"
corrections:
in my world.
there was a evil shining dark dragon.
if that dragon where ever to die, he would release a dark shining blade. that blade is (frighteningly powerful/ powerful beyond compere/the most powerful blade in the world)
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- mitsuki95351 - 07/24/2009
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the story is grate but your grammar kills it
do you have a deviant art? - Report As Spam
- regna91 - 07/24/2009
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Guys!! I'm really really sorry about my grammar~~
My English is horroble~ By the way,I never double check my work! hahah,because I'm running off time at that time.
Guys,sorry.. but thank you so much.. (^,^!) - Report As Spam
- ClearlyClockwork - 07/22/2009
- GAH head hurts from grammer! but the story and picture is good but Gah!
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