- Title: The Rainbow Bridge
- Artist: ok kye
- Description: As she was walking along one day, a girl found a strange golden heart lying on the ground. She bent down to pick it up, thinking someone had lost their locket, and when her fingers closed around the chain a golden key appeared in her hand. When she looked up, a rainbow bridge lay at her feet, leading all the way up into a glorious castle in the sky, floating behind another rainbow. She was vaguely aware of wings at her back as she took the first step...
- Date: 01/18/2010
- Tags: rainbow bridge castle original pretty
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Television Conspiracy - 01/29/2010
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Maybe a uniform of some sort, like the girl is walking from school or something? The clothes aren't making sense to me.
But otherwise everything else is great. 4/5 - Report As Spam
- i_am_mclovin94 - 01/29/2010
- beautiful
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- Mini-Miniature - 01/29/2010
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Vary creative and I understand why her back's to us ;D 5/5 good job ^w^
Btw: I never give ppl a 5/5 xD
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- ok kye - 01/27/2010
- The reason it's turned to the back is so it actually looks like she's going to walk up the rainbow bridge. If it was flipped front, it wouldn't look like she was walking into the sky; instead it'd seem like she was walking away from it. Another reason why it's a back view is to give the illusion that the girl doesn't know you're watching her. If she was facing front, it'd look like she was posing, or at least it would to me.
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- Slide Hammer - 01/27/2010
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I am inclined to agree with the previous comments, you really should have turned the avi around. It is cute, but it could have been better. There is a background with a castle in the clouds, get it and then the picture will be complete. As is, I have to give you a 3/5. A good start, but you need to complete the picture a bit. Keep up the good work!
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- one_and_only_me_jean107 - 01/26/2010
- nice. smile
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- Maldoria - 01/25/2010
- I agree with AglassBucket... The story is very good and I like the concept - however the avatar is fairly basic and having the avatar turned with its back to us just takes away some of the added detail you could have used to your advantage. I wish more avatars had descriptions like this though >.> very good.
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