Life

• Artist: mds23
• Description:
• Date: 08/07/2008
• Tags: life

Some people dont take life seriously life is NOT a game life is short so take advantage of your time on earth some people dont know were they are going when they die some people dont care where they are going heaven or hell evil and the people dieing cause of drugs and money some people dont care who the shooting they just shoot people need to stop killing and realize that killing is senseless cause the only thing that happens when u kill a person
u go to jail and 1 more person in jail for life so that persons life is over when all that person had to do is not pull the trigger.
thats my idea of LIFE

Comments

[Princess of the Crows]

Okay, the rant is a good way of doing things...but the grammar needs work. It's hard to take work that isn't edited well seriously. At least using the right words and slightly correct punctuation.

Now for the actual writing. I can see your strong opinion on life within this, but there is a lack of what solutions can be made.