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The city is a living organism,
Soon becoming evening,
Cars barge through the vein-like streets,
This grand metropolis full of wonderment,
The smoke rises through its lungs,
Polluting the air and causing it pain,
As the city is eternal,
Like Ouroboros,
How long will it able to sustain this?
Is it like a flame will it soon burn out?
- by Inferndragon |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 12/02/2008 |
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- Title: The city of living pollution
- Artist: Inferndragon
- Description: This is a giant metaphor describing cities as organisms... Describing polution as a illness...
- Date: 12/02/2008
- Tags: city living pollution polution
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Comments (3 Comments)
- D1V1N3 SA1N1T3 - 02/01/2009
- I don't agree at all with the other's but I get where coming from and yes our world is taking on to much pollution from us that it could burn out soon...though there have been many technological advances that it is our fault for not going green even if it costs a little more it is a better step for us to take I give you a 3/5.
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- Vela-chan - 12/14/2008
- Such talent! 5/5
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- Skyroller - 12/12/2008
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Quality writing?
On Gaia?
Impossible!
5/5 - Report As Spam
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