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Hot
Hell is hot
Burning everything
Ruining and changing
Cold
His eyes are cold
Seeing right through me
I shiver as He sees me
Dead
I am dead
Inside and out
Through and through out
Thin
My hopes are thin
Wisps of air
As if none care
Silent
My heart is silent
Never moving
Too afraid of pumping
Dry
My throat is dry
I would drink water
But the earth would not be bothered
Alone
I am not alone
They surround me
Above and below me
Strong
We are strong
Only together
Can we free our brother
Lies
He fed us lies
Now we shall fight
Now he will feel fright
Alone
He is alone
No one is by his side
No one for him to falsely guide
Weak
He is weak
Barely able to lift a finger
His power is a whisper
- by PurpleHeartOfPain |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/20/2008 |
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- Title: Hell and He (Revised)
- Artist: PurpleHeartOfPain
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Description:
The original "Hell and He" was mising four lines at the end...
but I couldn't edit the first one...
which is why we are here...
enjoy! - Date: 07/20/2008
- Tags: hellandhe hell
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Comments (5 Comments)
- reapersuns manfriend - 07/20/2008
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The poetics of war, it seems.
Very nice, indeed.
Though having a stop every stanza that tells the reader what you're talking about doesn't help. Let the reader think about it on his or her own, and I'm sure they'll get it. - Report As Spam
- Rozoko - 07/20/2008
- Well done! A fine piece of poetry. Keep it up! I give it a 5
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- Rainbow And A Smile - 07/20/2008
- It's very interesting. Makes you think. I like it.
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- DJ Hotplumpnicoleprimaj - 07/20/2008
- make your own because if u know u like this stuff try 2 make it good i believe in u!!!!!!!!! nice choice though!! well done well done!!!1
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- greenshock792 - 07/20/2008
- iits simple, i like it^^
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