To awaken in destruction

• Artist: Ninjutsuninja
• Description: A light little poem (at least, I feel it to be rather light) I made for a poetry reading one time. The whole thing is a rather odd metaphor for rain. This whole thing is pretty much how my mind works when it's pouring buckets outside. Enjoy o3o
• Date: 07/21/2008
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To awake in the wake of destruction
Is bliss
While the skies become clouded with the darkest ash
And lightning flares
Whilst the earth quakes
The world shakes
Chaos is abound
And within my sanctuary
I watch
I smile
I observe the demons fall from the sky
And crash upon the ground
Ah, but my tea is sweet, my bed is soft
My worries are so far off
The bedlam of the world around me
It makes me smile, harbor such glee
And as I turn my back to the window
With a most delicate sigh
My sanctum she calls to me

Comments

[Dynamite_The_Cool]

this is great, im guessing the last part was about his lonliness

[Atheshya]

This poem has imagery, and is original. This is a very good thing. I'll go ahead and give it four stars.

[Cyanide Wolf]

very spectacular. one of the best i've seen. write more pl0x!