- I love this person as he holds my heart in his hand.If he puts hands in his fist he will crush my heart then I will die and if he loosens his grip on my heart,then my heart will drop to the ground and will also be spoiled,and I will also die then.So almost either way I might die.
- by vampire_effect123 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/23/2008 |
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- Title: I love this person
- Artist: vampire_effect123
- Description: Well I did this poem when I was really bored and I hope you like it it's my first time submitting a poem plz dont be mean^_^
- Date: 07/23/2008
- Tags: loveheartvampireeffect123persondie
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Rika8484 - 12/23/2008
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It's nice. Very expressive.
I would suggest formatting it a bit. At least put spaces between the sentences. Spaces after the commas and periods.
Text in a block like that can be difficult to read, or unattractive to the eye. - Report As Spam
- XxAsian PlayaxX - 07/23/2008
- good
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