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black is the soul,destand for me
black is the fear that no one can see
black is the hart inside my chest
black is the one i love the best
black is he who calls my name
black is his immortal pain
black is silence,dark and sweet
black is the sound of my hart beat
black is the hand that becons me
black is the future that i see
black is the choice i must make
black is the chance i must take
life or death
or somthing between
all is not what it seems
- by MayfaireFun |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/26/2008 |
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- Title: Black
- Artist: MayfaireFun
- Description: a strange color poem
- Date: 11/26/2008
- Tags: black
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Comments (4 Comments)
- messy midori - 12/21/2008
- It's really good smile
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- onionio - 11/29/2008
- i love all the metaphores! it does flow quite nicely.
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- tksunshine93 - 11/29/2008
- okay MezzoForte it doesn't matter if black is a shade what matters is the poem which, MayfaireFun, I think is very good. It's unique and well written. Has nice rhythm, nice flow. Black can be very symbolic, and I think you did a great job of showing that.
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- MezzoForte - 11/27/2008
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"A strange color poem"
Black's a shade 1/5 - Report As Spam
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