cupid mistake

• Artist: Sion Mekos
• Description: Inspired by a Perry Bible Fellowship comic strip, and worked up into an ode to the delight of the flesh. *ahem*
• Date: 12/07/2008
• Tags: cupid mistake

i'd love you
i'd love you and everyone
the soul inside our blood

we could all consecrate lust
end ephemeral desire
it's all just dust anyway
i've chosen to embrace
this fire

but don't think i'm happy
with this carnal reality
if i could sample heaven
for just one stricken second
i'd never need sin again

but instead i wet my lips
and bait my breath
i'll burn in this blood
drown in epidermal bath
until death

i'm saving myself
letting go
just letting go
of everyone

Comments

[~Shadey Sam~]

I like this poem very much, it's very good.

[HeartInHandNotInMouth]

there was like freakin 3 words i didnt understand but im use to it because of the music i listen like panic at the disco. but it has a different point of view than most poems, and i like that because it keeps things original. i understand the last part too... cuz thats what i have to do sumtimes in order to keep ppl happy...

[Sion Mekos]

how ironic that a decent bit of praise is more effective criticism than anything i've heard before. thanks both for the compliments and for making me aware of how cliche my poetry was starting to be.

[tom_boy_mauh]

5 *'s!

[tom_boy_mauh]

kewl!
mweh love emo-ish poems!