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12/31/08 By: Brandon K. McLemore
Deadly sins currupt my soul, contacted with lies and sneakyness. Controlled by darkness, fear of nothing, fear for you. Feel hatred from all directions, coward me into corners and out of light. Feeding myself with shallow emotions, your anger gives energy to lonelyness. Alone with my thoughts which will leave me sonn, your smile fades to dust, nightmares of you scare my own dreams. Dreams of tears falling down your cheek, dreams are seen as blood leacking from hearts. Hearts crack just like I did, I will take you in my shadow. I can feel you suffer, my touch will heel your wounds. Your tears heal my heart, I hold you tighter preventing you from breaking down. Hell is my sancuary, it feels so good to be in darkness.
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- Title: "No Titled Needed"
- Artist: Edge Bjorn
- Description: Idk y I wrote this :P hope u guys in joy one of my simpler poems...
- Date: 12/31/2008
- Tags: titled needed
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Emmizine - 01/28/2009
- Humph, well i liked it, I agree that it sneaky IS a good word for it. 5/5
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- TaeminsLips - 01/27/2009
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IDK what those others were talking about but "sneakyness" fits fine to me O.o..
wow am i the only one who thinks its fine???
awsomesauce poem =///,..,^=
5/5 monikeen ;P
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- Brok3n_H3art33 - 01/03/2009
- I aggre with whitejade13 and Mutandanstan. Sneakyness just doesn't fit at all. 3/5 sorry.
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- whitejade13 - 01/02/2009
- Yeah it is good. However I agree with Mutandanstan, sneakyness just doesn't fit. 5/5
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- Mutandanstan - 01/01/2009
- Its good, but I would change the word 'sneakyness' because it doesn't seem to fit to me.
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