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Simple dreams,
Shine on me like beams,
Your dreams will come true,
If you believe in you,
Fallow your heart,
Never fall apart,
Make your dreams come true,
They will come true for only you,
Never give up,
Dreams are like a fragile cup,
Dreams may break,
But they are never fake.
- Title: Dreams
- Artist: Lex2442
- Description: this is just a simple poem to tell you to fallow your dreams! you, ando nly you can make your dreams come true!
- Date: 01/22/2009
- Tags: dreams
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Gravetye - 02/17/2009
- "Follow" was mispelled. Also, the subject is kinda cliche, and the rhyme seems forced. Remember, you don't have to make something rhyme for it to be poetry. Try writing this in free verse and check your meter to see if you can get it to flow any better.
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- maite_kishibaki - 01/25/2009
- soo cute i love it
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- Sassy Katara123 - 01/23/2009
- I LOVE IT I LOVE THE POEM. It's so sweet and kind and you know what i will follow my dreams. I wasn't before but know that i see ur poem i will follow my dreams!
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- Lex2442 - 01/22/2009
- Hope everyone likes it. I need to fallow my dreams, and i think writing this poem is a good start.
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