falling

• Artist: xmoon_dancex
• Description: xelyn and emi thought this was good tho i disagree....it was written in the middle of the night hence the randomness of it all...tis is only 2/3 of it cuz i've lost the rest
  
  i'm sorry for making you read my terrible thing
• Date: 01/25/2009
• Tags: falling

falling throughout darkness
surround only by pain
falling beyond the grave
and my life has just begun
the only thing making this bearable
is that i'm falling with you

falling with devils
you with the angels
falling through black light
white light for you
our differences are tearing us apart
yet we fall together still

falling to life
and then to death

Comments

[Xelyn Craft]

This is wonderfully put together, you have a tallent with words. The subject matter makes me worry about you a little... but I guess it's no worse than the things I write. I just don't submit any of my writing.