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As I look up in this sky
On this cool, dark night,
I see a circle, white and calm,
That does not give much light.
It sits up there in its place
As nocturnal insects drone.
Surrounded by stars it is,
Yet it is alone.
The stars around it dance and spin
Ignoring their large friend,
As she hangs alone up high
On this dark night again.
The great big circle up so high
Is beautiful and lonely.
If only the stars around it cared,
If only, if only.
- by The Buradi Mari |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/27/2009 |
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- Title: The Moon
- Artist: The Buradi Mari
- Description: I submitted this poem to a poetry contest with the International Library of Poetry/International Society of Poets. It got me to the semi-finals, where I submitted a different poem of mine. It was also an Editor's Choice. It was published worldwide in two books, under my name of course. I'm not emo, so, please don't post hateful comments about me being emo.
- Date: 01/27/2009
- Tags: moon stars
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Comments (6 Comments)
- suuunnn - 02/03/2010
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clap clap applaud applaud
i love this biggrin - Report As Spam
- The Hardcore Otaku - 10/01/2009
- Loved it. True work of art.
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- Kuri-Mu Momo - 06/05/2009
- I love it ! XD. Its very beautiful.
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- swifty07837 - 01/30/2009
- it was good, so your talented too smile
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- Le Honey - 01/30/2009
- COOL POEM
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- Taras Krieg - 01/30/2009
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Very good! *claps at your lovely poem*
5/5 - Report As Spam
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