Abuse

• Artist: fruitloop1202
• Description: its just what i have wanted to do untill i havre had my best freind ever come along and save me from my grave and i thank her and think about what she did for me every minute of my life and she knows when something is wrong and makes me tell her cuz she said she cant bare losin meT_T
• Date: 06/05/2009
• Tags: abuse

why do i get hit every day
i go and hide in the hay

i reach into my jeans
i look at the rips in the seams

my stepdad cut my leg open
i ran away like i was hopin

i grab the the razor blade
my life will soon fade

i feel the ice cool metal
i put it on my wist so i can soon settle

it lays on my vein
this abuse is turning me insane

a watch the blood drip
and all the mosquitos take a sip

i scream in pain as it starts to dim
all this because my mom chose him

i stare at my coffin as they lower it down
no one is there to watch me go in the ground

Comments

[seven_Sin_incarnate]

i agree with cherry, try and let your rhymes flow more. but all in all an ok poem compared to alot of the trash on here.

[Denial With A Smile]

very emotional.

[Cherrypoplove]

its a good poem and im glad that u didnt do it - but the rhymes are a bit forced biggrin