Don't slip away yet!

• Artist: Prince Bagel
• Description: My friend was planing to kill herself... I hope at least this will make her think twice.
  Plus this is also a poem for a story I wrote @_@ its mostly for my friend though!
• Date: 11/28/2009
• Tags: dont slip away

I see you on the hospital bed is this hopeless? How can this happen?
I hold tightly on to your hand as warm tears flow down the curve of my cheek.
I watch your heart beat on the screen and I hold that much closer to my own.
I can't bare to see you in such pain!
I can't bare to see your breath slowly fading!
Why must you die now! Not now please!!
don't you dare leave me now!
Don't let your life slip away please I beg of you! Stay here with me!!!
Don't shut your eyes you can't do that!! Please not now!! not ever!!
If you die I want to die first!!

Comments

[bubbles53577]

that is really heartfelt, love the ending

[Prince Bagel]

>w< thank you very much

[bloodygirl17]

I love the way that the begging for her to stay in this world flows through the poem. I can really picture someone yelling and telling that other person not to die. 1billion/5.