Its a sonnet...but not a sonnet...about writing a sonnet! Yes, I know its mind boggling.
Another Tomorrow is my collection of poetry. I write mostly in free verse, so my poems rarely follow any traditional structures (blank verse, hiaku, iambic pentameter ect.). Opinions are welcome, as well as critiques. But I highly doubt any critiques will lead to revision, but there is the possibility. Its rare because once I've decided a poem is finished, I rarely edit it ever again. But critiques are welcome so my future poems will end up better. heart
Write me a poem,
Fourteen lines of unrequited love.
Write me a message,
Ten and four lines of piercing sorrow.
Write me of a theme,
Eight and six lines of love's ponderings.
Write me a poem,
Eight and six lines of of the first heartbreak.
Write me a message,
Ten and four lines of love's painful cost.
Write me of a theme,
Fourteen lines of the heart's many woes.
Write a sonnet sweet,
Lines from the hearts of lovers parted.
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The Path Less Traveled
This is a journal/archive. Peices I've written are titled TITLE//PART//version(draft). Feel free to critique my writings via pm. They are appreciated very much.
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Oh yeah? Well I don't like your hamster.
Yup, I pretty much just went there
Yup, I pretty much just went there