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Crimson Kisses
Crimson Kisses

When you kissed me, it felt like fire, the warmth of your love
When you held me, it felt like the wind, so strong, I felt so safe.
When we were together, it felt like the stars, so happy above.
When I thought of you, it felt like the sun in my heart, the light shining away any pain.

Now when I think of those crimson kisses, I feel so sad, that love is now gone.

Now I feel like ice, frozen and cold.
Now I feel like the wind can blow me away.
Now that Im alone, the stars have gone.
Now when I thing of you, its like a cloud has filled my heart, dark.

When I think of those crimson kisses, I cry, knowing that I will no longer feel them.







User Comments: [4]
Wolf Goddess_Luna
Community Member





Sat Nov 14, 2009 @ 02:37am


Oh wow. This is great, I love the way you put the Elements in here. Is so sad but really beautiful.


Foxless
Community Member





Tue Dec 15, 2009 @ 11:56pm


He might have left but you still brighten up the place <.<


Peasley
Community Member





Fri Jan 01, 2010 @ 08:27pm


I love how you related the first stanza to the second one. The Current and the Aftermath stages. This was really sad, but beautiful nonetheless. Keep it up!


MightWrite2Night
Community Member





Mon Jan 04, 2010 @ 12:38am


It's ethereally beautiful. I love it.


User Comments: [4]
 
 
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