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Tears fell slowly intermingled with rain as the girl kneeled in the mud. Her clothing drenched with oncoming cold and the winter chill. She had been warned not to venture out into the world but without hesitation she didn’t listen and like always she was wrong. She felt frost’s breath upon her skin and as she stared into the frozen spears of rain, she wondered. Why did she have this horrible luck?

As she looked around her, she knew that her outfit was ruined, soaked to the core and completely stained with the ominous mud. Slowly her golden curls moved to either side of her face as she continued looking into the sky, silently cursing herself for her clumsiness. She stood to face the heavens still trying to resist the call of death as a warm fuzziness engulfed her. As the rain continued to fall on her figure, rather wash off the mud, it froze it to her being, a forever monument to her last moments. The lonely look of desperation and sadness as tears still rolled down her face…


((Mind you the Black is suppost to be the Mud. This is also my first submission into the arena. I've always watched from afar but never have I entered one before. I was thinking of doing a ghost type look a while ago but I took it out thinking of getting the "Seen it before. Its been Done. OMG Can't you be orignal?". So seeing the April fools item after trying to equip the halo (Man my heart was beating fast, I was so excited), I thought of this. A girl crying in the rain captured my intrest. Why else would someone get their face all black unless they were in a cartoon? The poor soul fell into the mud. Yes mind you most mud is brown but there is black mud where the soil is still rich. So keep you imagination open and wish me luck ^_^))





 
 
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