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- | Submitted on 10/03/2008 |
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- Title: My very first comic!!!
- Artist: mohddaniela
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Description:
Hi everyone! Well... This is my very first comic. It took me quite a long time to finish this, with school and tuition..... I dun really know whats my story about actually... =^=... I was hoping it will come to me when i'm drawing the comic...
Sorry if the comic's blurry...
P.S. no harsh comments pls .... im only 14 yrs old.... - Date: 10/03/2008
- Tags: very first comic suicide girl
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Comments (7 Comments)
- -Dance for love- - 10/03/2008
- Despite what two people said, about her being "to skinny" i would disagree as i have freids who are definitely that skinny. also with the "To Many Panels" I think that as long as you did other pages with less, THIS one as a page is Gorgeous.... Idd like to see more. Goodluck<3
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- Cassidy Fury - 10/03/2008
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Very good, but you do need to work on consistency (hair). Also, be wary of redundancy. In this page, it seems as though you are trying to show one moment from many angles. And that is fine, if that is what you mean to do, but be careful, because some people will lose interest if done too often.
Very good, especially considering your age. You do backgrounds and effects very well (rain). Studying anatomy may prove useful in your art. Keep up the good work, and good luck! - Report As Spam
- Tre Mal Joesph - 10/03/2008
- Nice
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- Clockworkcupcake - 10/03/2008
- it's a good start, but practice the figure, she's a little too long, and a little too slender. Keep it up and you'll get better ^_^
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- XingXingAsaka - 10/03/2008
- you need too practice with your art kk im 14 and i can draw noticibly better. the hair is also too stif it needs more life to it
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- DreamDrop_Riku - 10/03/2008
- Really nice I like the angles. but there are too many panels Keep in mind that five or six is a good number. =3
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- CookieMonsterr11 - 10/03/2008
- good job at drawing.♥♥♥
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