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  • The Moments: Books
  • Title: The Moments: Books
  • Artist: Catolic_Demon
  • Description: this is just some weird random comic i made of something that happened between my two friends Claire and Eric. If you dont get it, he barrowed the book 'Charolet's Web' three years ago, and he still hasnt returned it to her. XD I'm accepting any comic ideas, so if you would like me to make a comic of anything, just PM me if you want! Plz comment and rate whatever you think it deserves :3
  • Date: 08/03/2010
  • Tags: moments books
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Comments (1 Comments)
  • Current_User - 08/17/2010
  • um.. I think it needs to be understandable to the readers without the description at the bottom. Maybe another page before this or some comment about having the book so long. Also every panel is almost exactly the same plus they are super close to one another.. it's not natural =S That said I think you have a cute style and I saw see you making better comics in the future with practice.
 
 
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