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  • Title: Raziela, the wolf girl
  • Artist: Lynndis-san
  • Description: Another character made for my friend's RP. This is Raziela (kind of a rush job because I was at work lol) feedback is appreciated =3
  • Date: 06/01/2011
  • Tags: raziela wolf girl
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • the_red_squirrel - 04/30/2012
  • wow something good in the spotlight for a change, I really like this but one thing..could you make a squirrel one plezzzz!!!

    i'l be your best friend!!!!! oh and 5/5 BTW! smile
  • out of controll - 12/15/2011
  • START WITH FIRST COMMENT I LEFT AND READ UP

    The eraser marks are to white, you need to blend the pencil into it. That's one of the great things about working with a pencil, it blends well if you just smudge it with your finger a bit. It is a good start, but I would have suggested not rushing this piece.
  • out of controll - 12/15/2011
  • The ears look flat and need shading and possible make it look more natural by not having them be straight when her head is turned. The hip alignment changes from the leg with the arm and the torso. You need to pick how she is sitting and see if someone can actually sit that way comfortably. Her tail is also to far over and looks like its coming from her arm. It needs to start closer to the center of the lower back, and yes that means not as much would show unless you made it bigger. -next one
  • out of controll - 12/15/2011
  • He hair and skirt seem to be blowing in opposite directions. The way her legs and arm is positioned looks unnatural with the body, and she looks ridged. Also, if the boobs are that small they would not have that much cleavage to them. Either move them down and make them rounder at the bottom and bigger, or lose the cleavage all together. Unless she is wearing a push-up bra, they should be lower. -next comment (i have a lot to say)
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