- by Moondoggy09 |
- Painting And Drawing
- | Submitted on 03/24/2009 |
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- Title: Rayne
- Artist: Moondoggy09
- Description: The third and final centeral character from my manga I literally just finished drawing it moments ago Im not sure im happy with it but im not sure exactly what it is that bothers me so if you see a major flaw please point it out
- Date: 03/24/2009
- Tags: rayne moondoggy manga
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Pattie4000 - 03/24/2009
- I don't see any flaws at all! Your character is awesome!
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- III Piper III - 03/24/2009
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WOW.
best one so far!!
hm...try making the hair a little more smoother....
and again. darker shading in the folds of the clothes XD - Report As Spam
- Tayi Monster - 03/24/2009
- Hiya!!! I read your thread in our Death Note Clan and thought I would come check this out. I really like this picture... I can't draw (but I try!) so I am WOW ed! smile smile smile
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- Florcia Katty - 03/24/2009
- Nice! But the hair needs to be smoother... then the face will look prettier! The gun also needs some improvement! Everything else is just Fine! smile xp
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- kenomaru - 03/24/2009
- well, the head looks kind of off, maybe the gun could look better, and maybe make her left arm (the arm on the right) a bit thicker?
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