- Title: maryann's picture
- Artist: sohi_moon
- Description: it was my first attempt at drawing at this level and it took me about 6 hours to draw. i had never done this much shading on any one thing before. please leave some constructive critisism for me because i taught myself how to draw so im clueless. made entirely with pencil and lots of erasering. tips acknowledged and highly appreciated!!!also the oprange dot is a marker accidentally falling on the page. :D
- Date: 11/23/2009
- Tags: maryanns picture
- Report Post
Comments (6 Comments)
- Materu Shioni - 01/15/2010
- make her head a bit longer, the neck needs to be shorter, the eye is too close to the nose line so move it back a bit. put the ear closer to the ey but not too close, its not supposed to be off the back of the head tho. i learned how to draw by myself to but im just saying in my perspective that is what needs to be done. oh and also, erase the jawline as u get to the ear, like as soon as u hit the neck draw it a bit more and then stop and just shade, unless you want her to have a defined jawline
- Report As Spam
- 0_HIEN_0 - 12/22/2009
- Sohi i love the nacho cheese/marker spot razz
- Report As Spam
- sohi_moon - 12/19/2009
- it was my first ever drawing with this much work done on it. it was the first one to actually look like a real person so please dont be too hard on it. i can do much much better now so please check out my others.
- Report As Spam
- Your Typical Barmy Artist - 12/15/2009
-
I agree with the person below, despite the Death Note name.
Also, what's with the chin and the neck? And why do the shoulders slope so much? - Report As Spam
- death note L-2 - 11/26/2009
-
her head is too small
the ears are out of place
her eyes are too far up
the lips are horrible and her head is way to flat - Report As Spam
- JennyW97 - 11/23/2009
- i think it is amazing and i taught myself how to draw to so i wont be much help.
- Report As Spam
