- by Rin seragaki |
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- | Submitted on 09/01/2008 |
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- Title: Flying horse
- Artist: Rin seragaki
- Description: I was looking at a picture on my wall and started to draw a horse head and finished it at school
- Date: 09/01/2008
- Tags: flying horse
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Memories in the Mist - 03/31/2009
- I agree with Doggy. REALLY BAD!!!!!!!!!!
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- apollosgirl95 - 03/22/2009
- yep his schnoz is wayyyy long and his legs are short. but u have potential!!!
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- InFatesHands13 - 03/18/2009
- I agree with Sasha317; the proportions are a bit off. However, she's right, you will improve with more work, so, whatever you do, DO NOT GIVE UP! I face difficulties with my drawings too and I know it's not fun when people point out the flaws. But overall, this is a fantastic drawing and, with a little bit of editting, it could be... (oh what's a good word...?) Funderfully Fantabulous!!! biggrin
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- ArcticMoss - 01/01/2009
- You need to work on proportions. Horses are hard to draw and it usually takes a lot of practice to get it right. You seem to have be off on a good start though. Keep up the work and things will improve ^^
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- midnight_dream7 - 12/13/2008
- needs some work
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- Ali Em Bee - 10/11/2008
- ummmmm not that good work on the head . the muzzle is WAYYYYYYYYYYY to long
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- Ethereal Phantasmagoria - 10/07/2008
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uh...You need a lot more work. The head should be smaller or the body can be bigger, longer legs, less hair, smaller eye, bigger ears and the wings need joints (think of it as a giant arm)
You don't have to follow my advice and I ask you to look at my deviantart before you decide to flame me or something. I know some people don't like critiques.
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