- by Rosa Mina Fox |
- Painting And Drawing
- | Submitted on 11/16/2008 |
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- Title: The Lounging Girl
- Artist: Rosa Mina Fox
- Description: She was so peaceful...
- Date: 11/16/2008
- Tags: lounging girl
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Comments (7 Comments)
- soLascivious - 08/09/2009
- Its good, but the scibbles give it a more angry and confusing feel rather than peaceful. And i agree, the hair is a bit too jagged. it should flow just a bit more, right now she looks like something out of a bad hedgehog Sonic game lol. Overall, its good. 3.5/5
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- Aneisu - 03/08/2009
- i agree with waka_laka...but its also very beautiful
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- waka_laka160 - 02/05/2009
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also the breasts look more like male pectoral muscles.
and the ear is too low down.
the ear should be in line with the eyes!
(which look like there on the nose unless thats shading on the nose - Report As Spam
- waka_laka160 - 02/05/2009
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I have done life drawing for 2 years so far. the legs do need some work.
the arms and torso need attention too.
by the looks of things you did it all in a HB pencil (correct me if im wrong on that please)
get some nice soft bits of pure graphite and a good putty rubber.
also the background realy did ruin this its just a collection of scribbles that realy do ruin the image overall. - Report As Spam
- Iilyda - 12/15/2008
- Very awsome- don't listen to the other comments telling you to change or fix things, they have no idea how hard it is to draw legs in that position! Would take me half an hour and a foot long eraser till I got it right- keep up the good work!
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- Sapphocles - 12/15/2008
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nice job! I agree, work on the legs and hair a bit... and maybe make it a little more clear what kind of bottoms she's wearing. (Shorts? Skirt? Nothing?)
Over all good job! 4/5 - Report As Spam
- ToiletLlama - 11/21/2008
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you should fix the legs abit...try to make the hair more flowing throughout the grass. then you have it good. :'D
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