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  • The waters of Portuguese beach
  • Title: The waters of Portuguese beach
  • Artist: CrissCross4
  • Description: I drew this when I went to Portuguese beach in CA. As usual leave your constructive criticism :)!
  • Date: 12/06/2008
  • Tags: waters beach
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Comments (5 Comments)
  • Gizensha Sakugo - 05/04/2010
  • Lovely use of color. Try to make your pencil strokes more even and smooth, and don't be afraid to use pencil direction to acheive texture and space. Pretty good water, I like the foam you showed around the rocks.
  • Sand3 - 12/07/2008
  • I feel like the image should have been larger, as this is a large kind of scene, I think you should have used the full 640px available. Overall, the surface just doesn't seem quite worked enough. I would suggest loosing the colored pencils and just spending more time with the chalk pastels and charcoal, making a more textured surface with more light and shadows. This has a very two-dimensional look and you could br
 
 
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