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  • Attempt #2
  • Title: Attempt #2
  • Artist: Elegant Troll
  • Description: ok, so I've been teaching myself how to draw manga. This is my second attempt, so any suggestions you can make or any advice would be much appreciated!
  • Date: 12/09/2008
  • Tags: attempt
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • fantasymagic1997 - 08/17/2009
  • I think it's great for your 2nd attempt! I wish my 2nd attempt looked like that... XI But I agree with J-Mammon, you could work on the body shape, and next time before you scan it, go over it in pen or something so it's darker and more visible. Just keep on drawing and taking everything a step at a time, and you'll be a pro in no time! ;3
  • J-Mammon - 03/22/2009
  • you did pretty well if you ask me.BUT work on the body shape,learn how to master different poses using the same anime character ok
  • alice2468 - 02/11/2009
  • Believe me, MY second attempt was hideous. Yours looks very nice~ Maybe widen the hat's brim? And it's hard to tell since it's kinda small but the hips look wide.
  • sgamer4 - 12/11/2008
  • hmmm....looks like you need to start working on shading..that is one of the most important things to learn when it comes to manga....
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