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  • Allen and Timcanpy! XD
  • Title: Allen and Timcanpy! XD
  • Artist: Ofallthings
  • Description: omg. this is my first time drawing Allen from d gray man. plz comment rate, criticism is accepted too.XD but plz don't criticize on his body cuz i know that i need to change it. feel free to leave tips on HOW to change it though! XD
  • Date: 12/28/2008
  • Tags: allen timcanpy
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Comments (6 Comments)
  • Kenna Flames - 08/05/2009
  • The fingers are too long for the palm. You can either change the palm in making that part bigger to make the length of your fingers or shorten the fingers a bit. Perhaps define your shoulders more so they don't look so stiff and streight looking. His neck could also have more to it so he don't look like his heads on a poll. Just widen it a little more on both sides of his chin. And its ok to have it on lined paper but it would look better on a plan white piece. Other than that its good.
  • Curly whirly - 12/28/2008
  • looks fine 2 me apart from the fact its on lined paper and to improve it u could make his fingers slightly shorter and his elbow slightly less pointed
  • Dracs_Girl - 12/28/2008
  • maybe you could try making the fingers not so long.... I know its hard doing hands but try to get them a little shorter maybe....
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